Softens language in 2.1 for Ken.

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                        their organization.  Internet2 reserves the right to make final
                        decisions about participation in the Federation.</p>
 
-                       <p>Participation in the Federation is limited to the period during which
-                       an organization is learning about Shibboleth and federated operations.  Upon
-                       completion of this period, the organization is expected to join a
-                       Federation (or some other management solution) that meets its long-term
-                       operational needs.
-                       </p>
-                       <p>By joining InQueue, an organization agrees that the Federation can list their name on the Federation web site as a member of the Federation.</p>
+                       <p>InQueue is intended to serve as a primary federation
+                       for an organization only during the period an
+                       organization is learning about Shibboleth and federated
+                       operations.  Upon completion of this period, the
+                       organization is expected to join a Federation (or some
+                       other management solution) that meets its long-term
+                       operational needs. </p>
+
+                       <p>By joining InQueue, an organization agrees that the
+                       Federation can list their name on the Federation web
+                       site as a member of the Federation.</p>
                        
-                       <p>In joining InQueue, an organization will make a good faith effort to maintain a web page describing their use of Shibboleth. This page will be linked from the Federation member list.</p>
+                       <p>In joining InQueue, an organization will make a good
+                       faith effort to maintain a web page describing their use
+                       of Shibboleth. This page will be linked from the
+                       Federation member list.</p>
+
                        </blockquote>
 
                        <h4>2.2  Data management</h4>